Mid year evaluation learning goals 2016

   
This is my learning goal evaluation and I have a learning conference today. My Dad's going to come today to learn about my learning on this slide. We had to find our evidence  for our reading, writing and maths.

Tion and Sion word endings

W.A.L.T know when to use the ending -tion or -sion. 

Math strategy

First draft

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

The Calf's No good Very Bad Day

Today is a great day to go for a stroll in the african savanna  for october, don't you think baby calf. I said “ok” and we went to the river but I could see something. Dad roared out run!!. My mum,dad,brother,sister,and grandma all ran fast. I was left i was in the water and i could feel a bite on my back it was a crocodile playing tug of war with me and the lions too. My herds coming i can see them. Then mum and dad , cousins,brother,uncles,aunts, and grandma came i felt great in my half bitten stomach.They rumed them of to the other side they told me to “run towards them”. but a lion got in front of me my Dad bumped him off  so everything was ok. I was back in the herd and happier than ever the end.

My dads walking he stops, looks around then smells the ground for clues. He tells three of us to run there's a pack of lions, run!. Suddenly i can feel a huge bite on my neck my dad and friends have run away. I’m in the water there's a crocodile pulling me their playing tug of war with me. The lions clamped  my skin pulling harder and harder the lions win. I'm screaming for help i can smell something, something like my herd. I see my herd the lions just took a bite out of me i bet, it was good because there likin there lips. Boom!! That's all i could hear, my friends rammed all the lions away my dad saved me its so good not to be pulled  and eaten thank you dad for saving me i said. The end.

Battle at Kruger sequence

	The herd of buffaloes are walking down the river.
	The lions are resting in the sun.
	The lions are being blinded in with the dry grass.
	The buffaloes saw the lions and started running back to the other buffaloes.
	The female lion is going to pounce on the buffalo calf.
	She caught the buffalo and  they were playing tug a war with the calf but the lions won and not the crocodile.
	All the buffaloes crowded around the lions to get there calf back.
	All the buffaloes made the lions scrum.
	The buffalo rums the lion and rescues the calf

Animal Creator

 Name: Tigegicheetah.

Habitat : African Plains

Head:Cheetah

Carnivore. Small antelope (such as gazelles and impala's), warthogs, hares, and game birds.

Predators and threats Eagles,hyenas,lions,leopards,baboons, and humans.

Legs:Giraffe

Lifespan,25 years in the wild

Mammal. The giraffe is the tallest mammal, reaching as high as 5.5 meters (18 feet).

Tail: Bengal tiger:

Hearing is their sharpest sense, five times better than humans, and their night vision is six times stronger than humans.

Life in the trenches

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.