I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Nature you did amazing with the diary entry keep up the great work. I like how you put nice juicy words like anniversary. Next time make the titles shorter. Keep up the good work.
Nature This diary entry was amazing! I really liked how you added a heartbreaking piece in your diary entry and told us that someone died. Keep up the awesome work!
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Nice Nature, I like your writing it is drawing a good picture in my head of what war was like.
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ReplyDeleteHi I really like your diary entry great job
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ReplyDeleteThat was a heart broken diary entry Natrue but, it was a amazing to keep it up.
ReplyDeleteNature you did amazing with the diary entry keep up the great work. I like how you put nice juicy words like anniversary. Next time make the titles shorter. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNature This diary entry was amazing! I really liked how you added a heartbreaking piece in your diary entry and told us that someone died. Keep up the awesome work!
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