The present

For the past week we have been writing a narrative on the short film the present hope you enjoy it here's the link. http://www.literacyshed.com/the-present.html

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

The Present

My mum got me a present one day. I was playing on the xbox 360  at my house then my mum opened the blinds. I carried on playing my xbox. I was curious and the box burst open. A puppy it jumped out it has a fluffy body and it's eye where big and brown. I thought to myself, it's missing a leg. I got angry and threw the puppy off of my lap. It has 3 legs. I said “Get lost pft”.

The puppy found a red ball and ran over with it to me. I kicked the ball away. He chased it everywhere. “He's a clumsy dog” I said to myself. I chuckled a wee bit. He bought the ball back. I tried to ignore him then he came beside me and gave me those puppy eyes. How could I ignore? I grabbed my crutches and walked off outside and threw the ball down the driveway and we played all day long.

I see why my mum got him for me because he's my twin, we both are missing a leg. From then on I felt so happy I got my bestfriend.