For the past 2 weeks my class and I have been writing about Danny Macaskill. He is a mountain biker and he loves to do things that pump his adrenaline.
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Hello my name is Danny Macaskill, I was rowing my worn out blue boat down a river, it
was all gunky and it smelt really bad. I finally stopped at my destination which was my biking spot. I looked around and saw jagged mountains that looked as sharp as glass. I grabbed my bike off of my boat and biked between two mountains, I felt nervous but the adrenaline took over and I felt alive. Pedal pedal I did parkour tricks with my mountain bike I climbed up a really steep mountain the view was so appealing.
I climbed another mountain with just one hand and then biked up a grass trail then I rode down and biked across a really thin stick and looked at the water my adrenaline just took over and I kept going I tried to not get my bike wet.
Then I biked between those two mountains and bunny hopped with my bike over some rocks it really pumped me to keep on doing more of it as scary as it is the adrenaline just takes over I bike for about 2 hours and then I walked in the clear water and put my bike back in the boat and rowed back to my home.
